Tuesday, April 7, 2015

The Final Verdict


After the music fades
and we receive
our final performance evaluation
about the audition
that is our lives

The last thing
we need hear
from the booming voice
sitting beneath 
the blinding white light

 is

"Try it again
once more with feeling"



3 comments:

  1. Ouch!
    That's painful. My friends were recently performing in a play. They did with feeling the first time, so luckily that wasn't a problem
    Nice topic though.

    Keep on writing Steve

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    1. Thanks Nada.....This was my little metaphor about life being an audition for being angels ;)

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    2. Thanks Nada.....This was my little metaphor about life being an audition for being angels ;)

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