Monday, August 19, 2013

Faux Hunt



Faux Hunt

The battle won
slowly winding down
clean up the debris

in the rubble
of what was


dead man
running


pursued by
very demons
he created


trap 
succeeds


mock trial
mere formality

last victim
executed


Revolution
over

2 comments:

  1. wow :) this is really good .. in many many ways of meaning n story love this Stevie n me thinks theres a lil bit in this fer everyone to think about :))

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  2. Thanks so much for the kind words.. Since beautiful flowing poems of great imagery not my strongest point (I do so envy those who have that gift) I try to focus more on thought provoking poetry.. Positive feedback from talented writers like yourself great motivation to keep improving ..

    Thanks again for all your support

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