Whatever pops in my frazzled head goes up on this wall,,, Not always pretty, but I always strive to be a little interesting and thought provoking
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Saturday, September 7, 2013
Hole In Me
Hole In Me
Down I descend in darkness drowning empty void surrounds suffocating in silence I open my eyes seeking light not forthcoming perpetual night has fallen I am gone
You are so sweet to take the time to reach out to someone you don't even know to help them.. I wish there were more angels like you in the world
Actually poetry is my main coping tool to flush all the crap that accumulates in my soul. I don't feel anymore depressed than usual, it's just sort a lingering feeling that follows me around like a giant shadow. It's almost a part of me but because it is such a constant in my life I've become very adept at dealing with it..
Thanks for caring, your concern means the world to me ;)
I know this feeling, but like all things in life, it doesn't last forever. Sometimes all there is to cling to is transientness, which can shine like a beacon through the night. Take care. - kat/@BeingMama
I absolutely love this! I'd quote the whole poem if I could! I particularly loved the opening stanza with the alliterative 'd's "Down I descend in darkness drowning"
Aw Steve. Such depression. Hope you have a stockpile of coping tools. Am here to talk if you need a depression buddy.
ReplyDeleteYou are so sweet to take the time to reach out to someone you don't even know to help them.. I wish there were more angels like you in the world
ReplyDeleteActually poetry is my main coping tool to flush all the crap that accumulates in my soul.
I don't feel anymore depressed than usual, it's just sort a lingering feeling that follows me around like a giant shadow. It's almost a part of me but because it is such a constant in my life I've become very adept at dealing with it..
Thanks for caring, your concern means the world to me ;)
I know this feeling, but like all things in life, it doesn't last forever. Sometimes all there is to cling to is transientness, which can shine like a beacon through the night. Take care. - kat/@BeingMama
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the words of encouragement.. I agree that everything in Nature goes in cycles
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this! I'd quote the whole poem if I could!
ReplyDeleteI particularly loved the opening stanza with the alliterative 'd's
"Down I descend
in darkness
drowning"
It gives a sad, dread-coming and eerie feel.
A thousand applause are in order
Thanks Nada for the sweet comments... When my friends read dark poems like this they want to have me committed for my own personal safety..
DeleteMore and more my poetry is my catharsis as I try to purge and exorcise all these demons poking at my soul
come back
ReplyDeletelifesaver always
in my back pocket
just reach for it
xx
lol..hope it's cherry flavored at least ;)
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