Show And Tell
We've reached
the crucial point
where the pain
of commencing
a truthful discourse
could not possibly be worse
than the hurt
from our current
slowly corrosive
silent denials
that are eroding
the foundation
of this relationship
So let's put aside
these pointless reservations
Lay our cards on the table
and play them out
as best we may
You know I love your pieces. Your flow always speaks to me.
ReplyDeleteAlthough the ending was perfect and to the point, I felt I wanted to read more.
Keep on writing Steve (Y)
Thanks Nada...I confess I struggled with this ending but due to real life time pressures the ending was definitely cut short
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